One nice sunny there were a group of teenage friends were just having fun but then suddenly when the group of teenage friends were making there way back home they saw that the sea waves were getting closer , bigger,stronger.
The group of friends were so scared that on of that they may not make it back home and that they would never see their family again but then one person form the group of friends said that we should get our family get some stuff , meet back at the
highest building and we shall wait until the Tsunami stops then we should go back home.20 years later the group of friends became teachers at WPS and thought that there students at WPS should do a Tsunami experiment and see what would
happens if a Tsunami happens and what would happen in a real life Tsunami.And here is the ingredients:Sand,Water,Bomey nockers ,Leaf,News paper.And the group of friends name is Mr To'oala,Whaea Ocea and Whaea Sam.We had to get into our
groups and my group members is Jayed,Zac,Simon,Robel,Ritybe and Me Asi. We had so much fun that we just want to do it over and over again. 
Nice job Asi,I really like you story, but this part of your story does not make sense
ReplyDeleteThe group of friends were so scared that on of that they may not make it back home. All you need to do now is sequence your story into paragraphs.